You have made good use of colour and stuck to a consistent style throught your leaflet. You have used images which would be suitable for your target audience. The quality of the information/text in your leaflet could be improved.
I agree that your use of colour is good, producing an appealing leaflet. AMQ has said that you could think about the quality of your information, and I agree. Is there more you could tell us about when Deadly 60 is coming to the Zoo? What about the refurbishment of the Reptile House - what difference will that make, and what animals might we be able to see? Your prices would be a bit easier to read if you put them into a table (see your teacher about this) - and put everything to two decimal places - which is the usual way to show money.
You have made good use of colour and stuck to a consistent style throught your leaflet. You have used images which would be suitable for your target audience. The quality of the information/text in your leaflet could be improved.
ReplyDeleteI agree that your use of colour is good, producing an appealing leaflet. AMQ has said that you could think about the quality of your information, and I agree.
ReplyDeleteIs there more you could tell us about when Deadly 60 is coming to the Zoo? What about the refurbishment of the Reptile House - what difference will that make, and what animals might we be able to see?
Your prices would be a bit easier to read if you put them into a table (see your teacher about this) - and put everything to two decimal places - which is the usual way to show money.
I like the use of colour, the information is okkay but can be improved like the others have said;D x
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